Language Solution

2019 DSE Paper 2 Writing

Q1  Yearbook Entry

Writing Task: The Yearbook Committee is putting together a book for all graduating students. The yearbook is a collection of photos and comments about school life, written and submitted by students. When read several years later, the yearbook will remind students of their time at secondary school.

You are a student in Class 6C at Kowloon Secondary School. The committee has asked you to complete the following yearbook entry.  Write about 200 words.

Useful Vocabulary

Level 3

Graduation (n) 畢業
Graduation is a significant milestone for all students.
Memory (n) 記憶
The yearbook will preserve our memories of school life.
Reflection (n) 反思
This yearbook entry is a reflection of my years at Kowloon Secondary School.
Achievement (n) 成就
We should celebrate our achievements and hard work.
Nostalgia (n) 懷舊
Reading the yearbook years later will bring a sense of nostalgia.
Classmate (n) 同學
I have shared many experiences with my classmates.
Experience (n) 經驗
My school experiences have shaped who I am today.
Journey (n) 旅程
The journey through secondary school has been challenging and rewarding.
Tribute (n) 致敬
This yearbook entry is a tribute to all my teachers and friends.
Dedication (n) 奉獻
The dedication of our teachers has been remarkable.

Level 5

Commencement (n) 開始
Graduation marks the commencement of a new chapter in our lives.
Ephemeral (adj) 短暫的
The ephemeral nature of school days makes them precious.
Recollection (n) 回憶
This yearbook serves as a recollection of our formative years.
Accomplishment (n) 成就
Our accomplishments in academics and extracurricular activities are noteworthy.
Sentiment (n) 情感
The yearbook captures the sentiment of our collective experiences.
Retrospect (n) 回顧
In retrospect, my time at Kowloon Secondary School has been invaluable.
Memento (n) 紀念品
The yearbook is a memento of our shared experiences and growth.
Formative (adj) 形成的
These formative years have been crucial in shaping our futures.
Reminisce (v) 回憶
We will often reminisce about the good times spent at school.
Endearing (adj) 可愛的
The friendships formed during school years are truly endearing.

Useful Sentences

Level 3

Graduation is an important milestone. (Simple sentence) 畢業是一個重要的里程碑。
The yearbook will preserve our memories, and we will cherish them forever. (Compound sentence) 年冊將保存我們的記憶,我們將永遠珍惜它們。
Although school was challenging, it was also rewarding. (Complex sentence – Cause and consequence) 雖然學校生活充滿挑戰,但也非常有價值。
My classmates, who have been with me for years, are like family. (Complex sentence – Relative clause) 我的同學們,與我一起多年的他們,就像家人一樣。
If I could relive these moments, I would do it all over again. (Complex sentence – Conditional Type 2) 如果我能重溫這些時光,我會再次經歷這一切。

Level 5

Graduation marks the commencement of a new journey that we eagerly anticipate. (Relative clause) 畢業標誌著我們熱切期待的新旅程的開始。
Not only did our school days fly by, but they also left an indelible mark on our lives. (Inversion) 我們的學校時光不僅飛逝而過,而且在我們的生活中留下了不可磨滅的印記。
If we had not experienced challenges, we would not have grown as individuals. (Conditional Type 3) 如果我們沒有經歷挑戰,我們就不會成長為個體。
Because the ephemeral nature of these moments makes them precious, we must cherish every single one. (Cause and consequence) 因為這些時刻的短暫性使它們珍貴,我們必須珍惜每一刻。
Reminiscing about the past, we often find that the friendships formed during these years are the most endearing. (Participle phrase) 回憶過去,我們常常發現這些年形成的友誼是最可愛的。

Q2  Hiring People from around the World

Writing Task: The following excerpt appeared in an article in the Hong Kong Daily Press:

To participate in today’s global economy, companies hire individuals whose skills and talent meet standards of excellence. One hundred years ago, people were hired from within the local community but today the best individuals are hired from around the world.

  • Write an essay for your English teacher.
  • Explain some of the benefits and challenges international talent brings to Hong Kong society and ways to ensure that people from the local community are not neglected.
  • Include a title for your essay.

Write about 400 words.

Level 3

Economy (n) 經濟
Hong Kong’s economy has benefited from international talent.
Talent (n) 人才
Companies seek talent from all over the world.
Global (adj) 全球的
We are living in a global society where borders are less relevant.
Hire (v) 僱用
Businesses hire skilled individuals to stay competitive.
Community (n) 社區
The local community plays a vital role in the city’s development.
Challenge (n) 挑戰
There are challenges associated with integrating international talent.
Benefit (n) 好處
One benefit of international talent is the diverse perspectives they bring.
Excellence (n) 卓越
Companies aim for excellence by hiring the best individuals.
Neglect (v) 忽視
It is important not to neglect the local workforce.
Standard (n) 標準
International workers must meet high standards of excellence.

Level 5

Integration (n) 融合
Successful integration of international talent is crucial for societal harmony.
Diversity (n) 多樣性
Cultural diversity enriches the workplace and society.
Competitiveness (n) 競爭力
Maintaining competitiveness requires attracting top talent globally.
Inclusivity (n) 包容性
Inclusivity ensures that local talents are also given opportunities.
Contribution (n) 貢獻
The contribution of international professionals is significant.
Innovation (n) 創新
Innovation often stems from diverse teams working together.
Collaboration (n) 合作
Collaboration between local and international staff can lead to breakthroughs.
Marginalize (v) 邊緣化
Policies should prevent the marginalization of local workers.
Equilibrium (n) 平衡
Achieving equilibrium between local and international talent is essential.
Sustainability (n) 可持續性
Sustainable practices include fair opportunities for all talent.

 

Useful Sentences

Level 3

The economy benefits from hiring international talent. (Simple sentence) 經濟受益於僱用國際人才。
Companies hire the best individuals, and they come from all over the world. (Compound sentence) 公司僱用最好的人才,他們來自世界各地。
Although there are challenges, international talent brings many benefits. (Complex sentence – Cause and consequence) 雖然有挑戰,但國際人才帶來許多好處。
The individuals, whose skills meet high standards, contribute to the economy. (Complex sentence – Relative clause) 技能達到高標準的人為經濟做出貢獻。
If we neglect local talent, it will cause social issues. (Complex sentence – Conditional Type 1) 如果我們忽視本地人才,會引起社會問題。

Level 5

Integration of international talent into the local workforce fosters innovation and creativity. (Relative clause) 將國際人才融入本地勞動力促進創新和創造力。
Not only does cultural diversity enrich the workplace, but it also promotes social harmony. (Inversion) 文化多樣性不僅豐富了工作場所,還促進了社會和諧。
If companies had not embraced global hiring practices, they would not have been as competitive today. (Conditional Type 3) 如果公司沒有接受全球招聘慣例,它們今天就不會如此有競爭力。
Because successful integration of international talent leads to sustainable growth, it should be a priority for policymakers. (Cause and consequence) 因為成功融入國際人才會帶來可持續增長,這應該是決策者的優先事項。
Marginalizing local talent would create long-term social and economic issues.  邊緣化本地人才會產生長期的社會和經濟問題。

Q3  Does Social Media Encourage or Stifle Public Debate?

The Hong Kong Daily Press invites readers to submit their views on the following topic:

Do social media platforms such as Facebook or Twitter encourage or stifle public debate? When first created, social media was thought to be a place where rational debate and logic would thrive. However, as time has shown, this is not always the case.

  • Write an argumentative essay.
  • Choose one side of the argument and state your position, giving reasons and evidence to support your view.
  • Include a title for your essay.
  • Write about 400 words.

Useful Vocabulary

Level 3

Platform (n) 平台
Social media platforms provide a space for public discourse.
Debate (n) 辯論
Online debate can be both informative and divisive.
Encourage (v) 鼓勵
These platforms encourage people to share their opinions.
Stifle (v) 壓制
Sometimes, opposing views are stifled in online discussions.
Rational (adj) 理性的
Rational debate is often overshadowed by emotional responses.
Logic (n) 邏輯
The lack of logic in some arguments can lead to misunderstandings.
Thrive (v) 蓬勃發展
Social media platforms were expected to thrive on rational discourse.
Evidence (n) 證據
Providing evidence is crucial in a strong argument.
Opinion (n) 意見
Sharing opinions on social media can lead to heated debates.
Public (adj) 公眾的
Public debate on these platforms can influence societal views.

Level 5

Discourse (n) 討論
The quality of public discourse on social media varies widely.
Polarize (v) 使兩極化
Social media can polarize public opinion.
Anonymity (n) 匿名
Anonymity on these platforms can lead to more aggressive behavior.
Amplify (v) 放大
Social media can amplify both positive and negative messages.
Algorithm (n) 演算法
Algorithms on social media platforms influence what users see.
Echo chamber (n) 迴聲室
Echo chambers can reinforce existing beliefs without challenge.
Censorship (n) 審查制度
Censorship on social media can limit free speech.
Misinformation (n) 錯誤信息
The spread of misinformation is a significant issue on these platforms.
Engagement (n) 參與
User engagement is often driven by controversial content.
Moderation (n) 監管
Effective moderation can help maintain civil discourse.

 

Useful Sentences

Level 3

Social media platforms encourage public debate. (Simple sentence) 社交媒體平台鼓勵公眾辯論。
People share their opinions on these platforms, and this leads to lively discussions. (Compound sentence) 人們在這些平台上分享他們的意見,這導致了熱烈的討論。
Although social media was meant to foster rational debate, it often stifles differing opinions. (Complex sentence – Cause and consequence) 雖然社交媒體旨在促進理性辯論,但它經常壓制不同的意見。
Platforms like Facebook, where users can post freely, sometimes become echo chambers. (Complex sentence – Relative clause) 像Facebook這樣的平臺,使用者可以自由發表意見,有時會變成迴聲室。
If algorithms prioritize engagement, it can lead to the amplification of extreme views. (Complex sentence – Conditional Type 1) 如果算法優先考慮參與度,這可能會導致極端觀點的放大。

Level 5

The discourse on social media, which was initially promising, has become increasingly polarized. (Relative clause) 社交媒體上的討論,起初充滿希望,但變得越來越兩極化。
Not only does anonymity allow for free expression, but it also encourages irresponsible behavior. (Inversion) 匿名不僅允許自由表達,還鼓勵不負責任的行為。
If users had been more critical of the information they consumed, misinformation would not have spread so widely. (Conditional Type 3) 如果用戶對他們消費的信息更具批判性,錯誤信息就不會如此廣泛地傳播。
Because algorithms amplify controversial content to increase engagement, public debate can become more heated and less rational. (Cause and consequence) 因為算法放大了爭議性內容以增加參與度,公眾辯論會變得更加激烈和不理性。
Censorship on social media, while intended to protect users, can sometimes limit free speech and stifle important discussions. (Participle phrase) 社交媒體上的審查制度,雖然旨在保護用戶,但有時會限制言論自由並壓制重要討論。

Q4  An Incident in the Final Game

Writing Task: You are a reporter for the sports section of the Young Post. You were attending the final game of the season between rivals St. George’s School and Royal College when something unexpected happened during the game.

  • Write a news report.
  • Describe the incident and what happened afterwards. Include thoughts and opinions from different people involved.
  • Give your report a headline.
  • Write about 400 words.

Useful Vocabulary

Level 3

Rival (n) 競爭對手
The game between the rivals was highly anticipated.
Unexpected (adj) 出乎意料的
Something unexpected happened during the final match.
Incident (n) 事件
The incident shocked everyone in the stadium.
Season (n) 季節
This game was the highlight of the season.
Opinion (n) 意見
Fans shared their opinions about the unexpected event.
Report (v) 報導
The incident was reported in all major newspapers.
Game (n) 比賽
The game took an unexpected turn in the second half.
Involved (adj) 牽涉的
Everyone involved had a different perspective on the incident.
Headline (n) 標題
The headline of the news report captured the event perfectly.
Shock (v) 震驚
The unexpected event shocked the audience.

Level 5

Spectator (n) 觀眾
The spectators were in disbelief after the incident.
Controversial (adj) 有爭議的
The controversial incident sparked heated debates.
Catastrophic (adj) 災難性的
The incident had catastrophic consequences for the team.
Allegation (n) 指控
Allegations were made against several players involved.
Escalate (v) 升級
The situation escalated quickly after the incident.
Confrontation (n) 對峙
There was a confrontation between the players and the referee.
Subsequent (adj) 隨後的
The subsequent reactions varied among the fans.
Instigate (v) 煽動
It was unclear who instigated the incident.
Disciplinary (adj) 紀律的
Disciplinary actions were taken against the players involved.
Repercussion (n) 影響
The repercussions of the incident were felt throughout the league.

 

Useful Sentences

Level 3

The game ended in a draw. (Simple sentence) 比賽以平局告終。
Fans were cheering loudly, and the players were giving their best. (Compound sentence) 粉絲們大聲歡呼,球員們全力以赴。
Although the game was going smoothly, an unexpected incident occurred in the last minute. (Complex sentence – Cause and consequence) 雖然比賽進行順利,但最後一分鐘發生了意外事件。
The incident, which involved a controversial decision by the referee, shocked the audience. (Complex sentence – Relative clause) 這起涉及裁判有爭議決定的事件震驚了觀眾。
If the players had maintained their composure, the incident might have been avoided. (Complex sentence – Conditional Type 3) 如果球員們保持冷靜,這一事件可能已經避免了。

Level 5

The spectators, who were eagerly watching the final game of the season, could not believe their eyes when the unexpected incident occurred. (Relative clause) 當意外事件發生時,熱切觀看本賽季最後一場比賽的觀眾簡直不敢相信自己的眼睛。
Not only did the incident disrupt the game, but it also led to a heated confrontation between the teams. (Inversion) 這一事件不僅打斷了比賽,還導致了兩隊之間的激烈對峙。
If the referee had been more attentive, the controversial decision that instigated the chaos might have been avoided. (Conditional Type 3) 如果裁判更專注一些,那個引發混亂的有爭議決定可能就能避免。
Because the incident had catastrophic repercussions for the team, disciplinary actions were promptly taken. (Cause and consequence) 由於這一事件對球隊造成了災難性後果,紀律措施被迅速採取。
Allegations of misconduct, which were initially dismissed, escalated as more evidence came to light. (Participle phrase) 最初被駁回的不當行為指控,隨著更多證據浮出水面而升級。

Q5  Where to Get Information about Pop Culture

Writing Task: This week’s question in the Young Post’s Over to You column is: Where do you get information about the latest trends in pop culture? Do you turn to newspapers and magazines or do you prefer blogs and videos on social media?

  • Write an article for the Over to You column.
  • Choose one or two areas of pop culture from the chart below and tell readers where you like to get information about the latest trends. Provide the name of the sources you recommend.
  • Give your article a title.
  • Write about 400 words.

Useful Vocabulary

Level 3

Trend (n) 趨勢
The latest trend in pop culture is gaining popularity.
Magazine (n) 雜誌
Many people prefer to read magazines for pop culture news.
Blog (n) 部落格
She writes a blog about the latest fashion trends.
Video (n) 影片
Watching videos on social media is a great way to stay updated.
Source (n) 資源
It’s important to choose reliable sources for information.
Social media (n) 社交媒體
ocial media platforms are popular for sharing trends.
Recommend (v) 推薦
I recommend reading online articles for the latest updates.
Information (n) 資訊
Accurate information is crucial for staying informed.
Concert (n) 音樂會
Going to concerts helps you experience the latest music trends.
Article (n) 文章
She wrote an article about the impact of social media on pop culture.

Level 5

Phenomenon (n) 現象
The phenomenon of social media has revolutionized how we consume pop culture.
Mainstream (adj) 主流的
Mainstream media often shapes public perception of trends.
Discourse (n) 討論
The discourse on social media trends is fascinating.
Curate (v) 策劃
She curates a selection of the best fashion blogs.
Aesthetic (adj) 美學的
The aesthetic appeal of videos is important for engaging viewers.
Insightful (adj) 有見地的
He provides insightful analysis on pop culture trends.
Demographic (n) 人口統計
Understanding the demographic of your audience is essential for content creators.
Subculture (n) 次文化
The subculture of indie music has a strong following.
Virality (n) 病毒性傳播
The virality of certain videos can be unpredictable.
Disseminate (v) 傳播
Social media helps disseminate new trends quickly.

Useful Sentences

Level 3

Blogs are a popular source for the latest trends. (Simple sentence) 部落格是最新趨勢的熱門來源。
You can read magazines, or you can watch videos on social media for updates. (Compound sentence) 你可以閱讀雜誌,也可以在社交媒體上觀看影片獲取更新。
Although magazines are informative, many people prefer blogs for their personal touch. (Complex sentence – Contrast) 雖然雜誌資訊豐富,但許多人更喜歡部落格的個人風格。
Social media platforms, which are widely used, offer quick updates on pop culture. (Complex sentence – Relative clause) 廣泛使用的社交媒體平台提供流行文化的快速更新。
If you want to stay updated, following popular blogs is a good idea. (Complex sentence – Conditional Type 1) 如果你想保持更新,關注熱門部落格是個好主意。

Level 5

The phenomenon of social media, which has transformed how we access information, is particularly relevant in pop culture. (Relative clause) 社交媒體現象已經改變了我們獲取資訊的方式,這在流行文化中尤為相關。
Not only does mainstream media shape public perception, but it also influences the dissemination of trends. (Inversion) 主流媒體不僅塑造了公眾的認知,還影響了趨勢的傳播。
If social media were not so influential, the virality of trends would be significantly reduced. (Conditional Type 2) 如果社交媒體沒有如此大的影響力,趨勢的病毒性傳播會大大減少。
Because social media allows for rapid dissemination, new trends can become popular almost overnight. (Cause and consequence) 由於社交媒體允許快速傳播,新趨勢幾乎可以在一夜之間變得流行。
Curating content that resonates with the demographic is essential for maintaining engagement on social media. (Participle phrase) 策劃與目標人群產生共鳴的內容對於保持社交媒體的參與度至關重要。

Q6  Movie Review on Cinderella

Writing Task: You are a reporter for the entertainment section of the Young Post. You have been asked to review a new film called Cinderella which is based on the comic series Princesses of Power.

  • Write a review of the film.
  • Include a brief description of the plot, how the characters are portrayed in this new version of Cinderella and why the director wanted to make this film.
  • Give your review a title.
  • Write about 400 words.

Useful Vocabulary

Level 3

Plot (n) 劇情
The plot of the film was intriguing and kept the audience engaged.
Character (n) 角色
The main character in the film showed significant growth throughout the story.
Portray (v) 描繪
The actors did an excellent job of portraying their characters.
Version (n) 版本
This version of Cinderella has a modern twist.
Director (n) 導演
The director’s vision for the film was clear and well-executed.
Review (n) 評論
The film received positive reviews from critics.
Comic (n) 漫畫
The movie is based on a popular comic series.
Audience (n) 觀眾
The audience was captivated by the stunning visuals.
Scene (n) 場景
The opening scene set the tone for the entire movie.
Adaptation (n) 改編
The film is an adaptation of a beloved fairy tale.

Level 5

Interpretation (n) 解釋
The director’s interpretation of the classic tale was innovative.
Cinematography (n) 電影攝影
The cinematography in the film was breathtaking.
Protagonist (n) 主角
The protagonist’s journey was both compelling and relatable.
Narrative (n) 敘述
The narrative structure of the film was complex and well-thought-out.
Dynamic (adj) 動態的
The characters’ relationships were dynamic and evolved naturally.
Allusion (n) 暗示
The film made several allusions to the original fairy tale.
Subtext (n) 潛台詞
The subtext of the film explored deeper themes of identity and empowerment.
Enigmatic (adj) 神秘的
The antagonist was portrayed as an enigmatic figure with hidden motives.
Evocative (adj) 喚起的
The film’s evocative score added to its emotional impact.
Symbolism (n) 象徵
The use of symbolism throughout the film added layers of meaning.

 

Useful Sentences

Level 3

The plot of the film was intriguing. (Simple sentence) 這部電影的劇情引人入勝。
The characters were well-developed, and the storyline was engaging. (Compound sentence) 角色發展良好,劇情引人入勝。
Although the movie is based on a comic, it brings a fresh perspective. (Complex sentence – Contrast) 雖然這部電影改編自漫畫,但它帶來了新的視角。
The director, who is known for his unique style, created a visually stunning film. (Complex sentence – Relative clause) 導演以其獨特風格著稱,創作了一部視覺上令人驚嘆的電影。
If you enjoy modern adaptations, this film is a must-see. (Complex sentence – Conditional Type 1) 如果你喜歡現代改編,這部電影是不容錯過的。

Level 5

The director’s interpretation of the classic tale, which has enchanted audiences for generations, was both innovative and respectful. (Relative clause) 導演對這個經典故事的詮釋既創新又尊重,吸引了幾代觀眾。
Not only did the cinematography capture the essence of the story, but it also enhanced the emotional depth of the narrative. (Inversion) 電影攝影不僅捕捉了故事的精髓,還增強了敘事的情感深度。
If the director had not taken creative liberties, the film might have lacked the modern appeal that resonates with today’s audience. (Conditional Type 3) 如果導演沒有採取創意自由,這部電影可能缺乏與現代觀眾共鳴的現代吸引力。
Because the film’s evocative score complements its visual style, it creates a powerful and immersive experience for the audience. (Cause and consequence) 由於電影的喚起性配樂與其視覺風格相得益彰,為觀眾創造了一種強大且身臨其境的體驗。
Utilizing dynamic character arcs and rich symbolism, the film delves into themes of identity and empowerment, offering a fresh take on the beloved tale. (Participle phrase) 利用動態角色弧和豐富的象徵,這部電影深入探討了身份和賦權的主題,為這個受人喜愛的故事提供了新的詮釋。

Q7  Different Ways to Criticize

Writing Task: Taylor Swift is an award-winning singer-songwriter. In an interview with Parade magazine she said:

“I wrote the song ‘Mean’ about a critic who kept giving me really bad reviews. I get that, no matter what, people will criticise what you do. But there are different ways to criticise someone… and there’s a line that you cross when you just start to attack everything about a person.”

You lead an after-school arts club. You would like to instruct members on how to review each other’s work.

  • Write a speech to be delivered to club members.
  • Discuss what a critic does, how to give criticism and ways to respond to criticism.
  • Give your speech a title.
  • Write about 400 words.

Useful Vocabulary

Level 3

Critic (n) 評論家
A good critic provides constructive feedback.
Review (n) 評論
Her review of the movie was very insightful.
Constructive (adj) 建設性的
Constructive criticism can help improve your work.
Feedback (n) 反饋
I appreciate your feedback on my painting.
Respond (v) 回應
It’s important to respond to criticism calmly.
Criticism (n) 批評
He gave some valuable criticism of my essay.
Attack (v) 攻擊
She felt attacked by his harsh comments.
Perspective (n) 觀點
A different perspective can be very enlightening.
Improve (v) 改進
You can improve your skills with practice.
Balance (n) 平衡
There needs to be a balance between praise and criticism.

Level 5

Detrimental (adj) 有害的
Constant negative feedback can be detrimental to one’s confidence.
Articulate (v) 清楚地表達
He is able to articulate his thoughts very clearly.
Nuance (n) 細微差別
Understanding the nuances of criticism is essential for growth.
Insightful (adj) 有見地的
Her comments were very insightful and helpful.
Objectivity (n) 客觀性
Maintaining objectivity while reviewing work is crucial.
Diplomatic (adj) 外交的
He handled the criticism in a very diplomatic manner.
Harsh (adj) 嚴厲的
Harsh criticism can discourage people from trying again.
Construct (v) 構建
Constructing feedback in a positive way is an art.
Substantiate (v) 證實
You should substantiate your criticism with examples.
Artistry (n) 藝術技巧
His artistry was evident in every brushstroke.

 

Useful Sentences

Level 3

A good critic provides constructive feedback. (Simple sentence) 一個好的評論家會提供建設性的反饋。
Her review of the movie was insightful, and it helped me see things differently. (Compound sentence) 她對這部電影的評論很有見地,幫助我以不同的角度看待事物。
Although criticism can be hard to accept, it is essential for growth. (Complex sentence – Contrast) 雖然批評很難接受,但它對成長至關重要。
A critic, who understands the nuances of feedback, can offer valuable insights. (Complex sentence – Relative clause) 了解反饋細微差別的評論家能提供有價值的見解。
If you respond to criticism with an open mind, you can improve significantly. (Complex sentence – Conditional Type 1) 如果你以開放的心態回應批評,你可以顯著提高。

Level 5

Constructing feedback in a positive way, which encourages improvement, is a skill every critic should master. (Relative clause) 以積極的方式構建反饋,鼓勵改進,是每個評論家都應掌握的技能。
Not only did the critic provide valuable insights, but he also articulated his points clearly and diplomatically. (Inversion) 評論家不僅提供了有價值的見解,而且還清楚而外交地表達了他的觀點。
If the critic had substantiated his claims with examples, the feedback would have been more constructive. (Conditional Type 3) 如果評論家用例子證實他的主張,反饋會更具建設性。
Because the feedback was so harsh, it was detrimental to the artist’s confidence and progress. (Cause and consequence) 因為反饋太嚴厲了,對藝術家的自信和進步造成了傷害。
Understanding the nuances of criticism, I aim to provide feedback that is both constructive and encouraging. (Participle phrase) 了解批評的細微差別,我旨在提供既有建設性又鼓勵性的反饋。

Q8  Designing A Campaign Poster for a District Councillor

Writing Task: You are a volunteer in your local district council office. You have been asked to design a campaign poster for Ricky Kwan, a candidate who will be running in the upcoming council election. You have finished two designs (A and B) and are working on a third (C).

  • Write an email to the council election committee.
  • Explain the ideas behind designs A and B and how they would make a good campaign theme.
  • Share the ideas you have for your third design.
  • Include a subject heading for the email.
  • Write about 400 words.

Useful Vocabulary

Level 3

Campaign (n) 選舉活動
The campaign aims to engage with the community.
Design (n) 設計
The new design for the poster is very appealing.
Candidate (n) 候選人
Ricky Kwan is a strong candidate for the council election.
Theme (n) 主題
The theme of unity is evident in design A.
Engage (v) 吸引
This design will engage more voters.
Voters (n) 選民
It’s important to connect with the voters.
Innovative (adj) 創新的
Design B is innovative and eye-catching.
Concept (n) 概念
The concept behind the design is to bridge the gap between the council and the community.
Message (n) 信息
The poster conveys a clear message.
Impact (n) 影響
The visual impact of design A is significant.

Level 5

Constituency (n) 選區
Ricky Kwan is well-known in his constituency.
Strategy (n) 策略
The strategy for the campaign includes social media engagement.
Representation (n) 代表
Effective representation is crucial for community trust.
Persuasive (adj) 有說服力的
Design B is particularly persuasive with its strong imagery.
Mobilize (v) 動員
The campaign seeks to mobilize young voters.
Symbolism (n) 象徵
The symbolism in design A is powerful.
Cohesion (n) 凝聚力
The theme of cohesion resonates well with the public.
Emphasize (v) 強調
Design B emphasizes innovation and progress.
Outreach (n) 外展
The campaign’s outreach efforts include community events.
Advocacy (n) 倡導
Ricky Kwan’s advocacy for education is well-received.

 

Useful Sentences

Level 3

Ricky Kwan is a strong candidate for the council election. (Simple sentence) 關瑞奇是一個強有力的議會選舉候選人。
Design A and design B are both innovative, and they convey a strong message. (Compound sentence) 設計A和設計B都很創新,它們傳達了一個強烈的信息。
Although design A is more traditional, it effectively engages the voters. (Complex sentence – Contrast) 儘管設計A比較傳統,但它有效地吸引了選民。
Design B, which uses modern elements, is intended to mobilize young voters. (Complex sentence – Relative clause) 使用現代元素的設計B旨在動員年輕選民。
If the theme of unity is emphasized, the campaign will have a greater impact. (Complex sentence – Conditional Type 1) 如果強調團結的主題,競選活動將有更大的影響。

Level 5

The strategy for the campaign, which includes innovative designs, is aimed at engaging a diverse constituency. (Relative clause) 競選活動的策略,包括創新的設計,旨在吸引多樣化的選區。
Not only does the campaign seek to mobilize young voters, but it also emphasizes community cohesion. (Inversion) 競選活動不僅旨在動員年輕選民,還強調社區凝聚力。
If the outreach efforts had been more extensive, the impact of the campaign would have been significantly greater. (Conditional Type 3) 如果外展工作更加廣泛,競選活動的影響會顯著更大。
Because the symbolism in design A is so powerful, it resonates well with the public and enhances the campaign’s appeal. (Cause-effect) 由於設計A中的象徵性非常強大,它很好地引起了公眾的共鳴,並增強了競選活動的吸引力。
Emphasizing Ricky Kwan’s advocacy for education, the campaign effectively highlights his commitment to the community. (Participle) 強調關瑞奇對教育的倡導,競選活動有效地突顯了他對社區的承諾。

Q9  The Tortoise and the Hare

Writing Task: Cosmo book shop is organizing a short story contest. The details are below:

In the tale The Tortoise and the Hare, two animals challenge each other to a race to prove who is the fastest. Mid-race, the hare lies down to rest, certain that it will win. The tortoise, though slow, never gives up and crosses the finishing line ahead of the hare. Slow and steady wins the race, as the message of the story goes.

  • Re-write this story.
  • Use the same characters but imagine that the tortoise and the hare team up to race against other contestants.
  • Express a message through the telling of the story.
  • Give your story a title

Write about 400 words.

Useful Vocabulary

Level 3

Challenge (v) 挑戰
The tortoise and the hare decided to challenge other animals to a race.
Contest (n) 比賽
The contest was held in the forest, with many animals participating.
Team (v) 組隊
They decided to team up and race together.
Determination (n) 決心
The tortoise showed great determination during the race.
Competitors (n) 競爭對手
The competitors were all ready at the starting line.
Victory (n) 勝利
Their teamwork led to a surprising victory.
Strategy (n) 策略
The tortoise and the hare planned a clever strategy.
Perseverance (n) 毅力
Perseverance was key to their success.
Obstacles (n) 障礙
They faced many obstacles but overcame them together.
Cooperation (n) 合作
Cooperation made them stronger competitors.

Level 5

Endurance (n) 忍耐力
The race tested their endurance to the limit.
Synergy (n) 協同效應
The synergy between the tortoise and the hare was remarkable.
Adversity (n) 逆境
They triumphed despite the adversity they faced.
Unwavering (adj) 堅定不移的
The tortoise’s unwavering determination inspired the hare.
Fortitude (n) 堅韌
The tortoise’s fortitude was admired by all the animals.
Resilience (n) 韌性
Their resilience helped them bounce back from setbacks.
Exertion (n) 努力
The hare’s exertion complemented the tortoise’s steady pace.
Synergize (v) 協同工作
They managed to synergize their efforts for a win.
Indomitable (adj) 不屈不撓的
The tortoise had an indomitable spirit.
Cohesiveness (n) 凝聚力
Their cohesiveness was the secret to their success.

 

Useful Sentences

Level 3

The tortoise and the hare decided to challenge other animals to a race. (Simple sentence) 烏龜和兔子決定向其他動物挑戰賽跑。
The contest was held in the forest, and many animals participated. (Compound sentence) 比賽在森林裡舉行,許多動物參加了。
Although the hare was fast, the tortoise’s perseverance made a big difference. (Complex sentence – Contrast) 雖然兔子跑得快,但烏龜的毅力發揮了很大的作用。
They decided to team up, which surprised their competitors. (Complex sentence – Relative clause) 他們決定組隊,這讓他們的競爭對手感到驚訝。
If they worked together, they believed they could win the race. (Complex sentence – Conditional Type 1) 如果他們一起合作,他們相信可以贏得比賽。

Level 5

The synergy between the tortoise and the hare, which was unexpected, led to an impressive victory. (Relative clause) 烏龜和兔子之間的協同效應,這是意料之外的,帶來了令人印象深刻的勝利。
Not only did the tortoise display unwavering determination, but the hare also showed great adaptability. (Inversion) 烏龜不僅展示了堅定不移的決心,兔子還展示了很強的適應能力。
If they had not synergized their efforts, they would have struggled against the other competitors. (Conditional Type 3) 如果他們沒有協同努力,他們將在與其他競爭對手的比賽中苦苦掙扎。
Because the tortoise and the hare complemented each other’s strengths, they overcame every obstacle and won the race. (Cause-effect) 因為烏龜和兔子互補了彼此的優勢,他們克服了每一個障礙並贏得了比賽。
Demonstrating indomitable spirit and fortitude, the tortoise led the team to an unexpected victory. (Participle phrase) 展示出不屈不撓的精神和堅韌,烏龜帶領團隊取得了意想不到的勝利。